I really enjoyed Shyanns it is very professional and it even has some clever puns in it. It gets to the point and really shows what this persons vodka is all about.
McCoys Audio Spot's was also good. It was alot lengthier than Shayanns but it also covered alot more ground. It even went into where the water was taken from and where the ingredients were from. While it didnt have a missiony statement feel. It did cover what the statement was.
Fundementals was good too. Reading through the ones that were actually done showed me that there is a wide market for vodkas. For men and for women. This particualar one was for women. Slender vodka is for the busy woman who cares about her calories. The mission statement was well written and supported by direct quotes.
Overall the ones i read were on spot. Not all of them were as professional as i was hoping but still decent none the less. Our class needs to work hard to catch up on your work!
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